The news station of New York City presents a story about crime. Please do not watch with kids. Miguel was the highest ranked detective in America. However, last week his hearth was broken as the girl of his dreams left him. He was left for his mistakes and he was sad about it. He was finally returning to the station, when he walked past a lake. He called a colleague but he was gone by the time they arrived and there was no body in the water. Please if you see this man contact the police at New York City.

100 Word Challenge Week 5

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  • October 21, 2017 at 4:00 pm
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    Another sad story for Miguel. Remember in news reports, you should provide factual information such as place, time, full name of victim, etc. What was found in the water? The picture has the feet. You need to mention this.

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